Monday, August 25, 2008

Chapter 3

2 Comments:

At September 9, 2008 4:28 AM , Blogger Noble said...

Paragraph 1. ...nor has fellowship with any others in their sin;2 this decree does not violate...

Do you need the word "others"?

After sin, it looks like you could just put a period and begin a new sentence. This decree...

 
At September 22, 2008 7:41 PM , Blogger Stan said...

I'm changing "any others" to "any".

I'm putting a period and beginning a new sentence.

Thanks for your input!

 

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