Sunday, September 7, 2008

Chapter 5

2 Comments:

At September 8, 2008 4:55 PM , Blogger Noble said...

In paragraph 2, line 10, it seems that the antecedent to "them" is not clear. You might want to do something like repeat "all things" to make this clear.

 
At September 22, 2008 7:38 PM , Blogger Stan said...

If "them" isn't clear in my version, it's also not clear in the original. :-) But I see your point, and I'm changing it to "all things".

 

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